Fighting Fire

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May 24th, 2010, 7:43 pm

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Finally!

cdbertram
Posted by cdbertram
May 24th, 2010, 7:43 pm
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Finally, he stops beating on me!! Now we're friends, too!


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Jerix
Posted by Jerix
May 31st, 2010, 4:24 am
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ok,

1. You need to fix the speech bubbles, as in, make some.

2. The characters need better shading, I used to work with advance style and I can tell you that you got the shading wrong

If you fix those things I'd be damn right impressed, also, I'll add this to my favs to see how this goes.



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cdbertram
Posted by cdbertram
May 31st, 2010, 6:43 am
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Is the shading wrong for BOTH, just the red one(Cassidy), or just the green one (Matt)?



Jerix
Posted by Jerix
May 31st, 2010, 6:59 am
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both, also, the skin colour cannot be bright green, and Cassidy looks wierd with the red shading but black fill



cdbertram
Posted by cdbertram
May 31st, 2010, 7:06 am
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CDBertram tried to base these sprites off the old ones (from the begginning of the comic) because someone said not to use them. So I can't change that, but what's wrong with the shading?



Jerix
Posted by Jerix
May 31st, 2010, 7:39 am
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unless zoomed in at 10x, it is not visible, make it more visible



cdbertram
Posted by cdbertram
May 31st, 2010, 8:16 am
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On the spikes?



Jerix
Posted by Jerix
May 31st, 2010, 8:49 am
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on the whole body, I would say etheir fix the head& clothing up or start the whole sprite (sheet) again, as in revamp, start again to make it better, takes a long time but if its good then in the end its worth it



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